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Pennie R. S. Nelson's avatar

That was a good start. It kept me reading and wanting more Matt.

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Ms. Writer's avatar

Way to build the anticipation, Matt!

I like the shorter 'parts' or chapters versus long form. And I think you ended Part 1 at the appropriate place. Keep it going!

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Matthew Murray's avatar

Thanks Ms. Writer! I'm having fun writing this. Wait until you see what happens next!

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Matthew Murray's avatar

Yep that's it.

I figure I'll eventually make this into a book and you'll want residuals. I'm thinking 80-20, mine being the 80. But don't hold me to it. 🤣 Then a motion picture company will want to make a movie about it. We'll be millionaires. 🤣

And you're welcome!

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Terry Freedman's avatar

🤣🤣

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